Not Yet Read Wake me up when it's over by kookycooky

Genre: Poetry : Reflection & Contemplation
Length: 1 page / 108 words
Reading Time: ~ 1 minute
Author Age: 33 years old when written
Author Note: I started with another poem but ended up writing this one and was not meant to rhyme
Tagline: "Sometimes I feel as though I would prefer sleep-walking through life"
Audience: G
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Beginning:
Its late. I should be asleep.
I am waiting, and waiting to
Fall into the land of dreams
Where the possibilities are endless

I dream of laughter and ice cream
Children dancing in the spring rain
I dream of oceans and vast mountains
Sunshine and snowballs

But my blissful dreams are shattered
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  • The author writes: "thank you, that's precisely what i was trying to convey"
  • BoneZ writes: "wow. i really really like this piece. the skip from sunshine to the alarm clock is really telling, and relays exactly what that person felt like...there was no in between, just consciousness...a slight drift into happiness, and then a rude awakening. good job."