Not Yet Read Butt Buddies Of The Century by Memories_Kill

Genre: Fiction : Dream
Length: 1 page / 200 words
Reading Time: ~ 1 minute
Author Age: 15 years old when written
Author Note: i wrote it today during my PSSA testing..i was madd bored..please don't yell at mee. well its actually true about my one friend.. and his nickname is in it..he read it and its perfectly fine with this..
Tagline: "a kid who tells his parents that he is gay.."
Audience: PG-13
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     One day the daddy sperm told the son sperm that he will have to have sex if he wants kids. Well the son sperm said " I don't want kids and i really don't like girl sperms. I'm more into guy sperms." The daddy sperm got p and floated away.. The next day the mommy sperm told the son sperm that is it wrong it like guy sperms.
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  • Vicious Vixon writes: "LOL. You must have been really really bored."
  • ezwriter writes: "Joel hit the nail on the head (exuse the cliche) that writing is a craft and it would be wise to perfect ones work before uploading it. Those who comment miss the point of a critque when they just applaud the stand the writer is taking (in this case homo sexulaity should be accepted). The point should be has the writer done a good job in crafted his argument. In this case I think not. The metahor is indeed as has been noticed, silly. Phil Pluta"
  • Lynn J.R. writes: "Hummm it was different...i'll leave it at that - nope maybe I won't - it seemed to go so far out in left field that it almost left the stadium and the message - it seemed like the writier was trying way harder than necessary to bring out this message creatively, but got silly with it instead - just like a rhyme shouldn't seemed forced , neither should imagination seem forced"
  • Joel David Harrison writes: "This piece is very...bizarre. If you wanted to make a statement about the acceptance of homosexuality in American culture, you could've found a much better way to do it. The use of sperm as some kind of metaphor isn't really working for me. In some ways it's much too obvious, and in other ways it's just flat out weird. Not that there is anything wrong with weird--I write plenty of weird stuff. It's pretty obvious that you just wrote this, typed it out, and threw it up here. I'd like to challenge you--and a lot of other writers here--not to do that. Revise your work. Writing is a craft. If you like to write, take pride in it. You have an imagination, and that's obviously a good start. Now strive to be better. Keep writing."
  • Caitlin H writes: "Um...a little confusing, but I think I like the point of it: "It's OK to be gay". Right? Is that what you're saying? If so, go you!!! If you're interested, see my piece "Straight, But Not Narrow," which deals with similar issues."
  • Ballie writes: "the ending is good dressed in white lol i dont like people that hate gay people (though i do find it AWKWARD to hang around them)"