The What If Game
by
Garrett Bradbury
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Beginning:
I stared at the screen for a few moments wondering what to write. I'd not shown anyone my work outside of my little circle of friends. I thought that maybe I should gather other opinions. Nothing was coming to mind though. It had been a half-an-hour of glaring at the screen, the little black line blinking and me counting the seconds as it does so, and still nothing.
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- kookycooky writes: "I wanted to read more of your work and there is nothing else! :O you simply cannot stop with this one!!!"
- kookycooky writes: "I had a strong feeling of deja vu reading this, that I must've read it in some novel but then I remembered someone emailed this some time ago and I liked this piece now as much as I did then :D"
- Keira Johnson writes: "Wow, this was a great idea. Creeped me out a bit! But i loved it, its really good (:"
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- Steph writes: "This story had me grimacing at the computer out of fear and a bit of revulsion, so it definitely accomplished its goal with me. Very vivid and slightly haunting."
- Emz. writes: "That made my stomach churn. Its incredible, I felt like I was there, watching, even though you give no description of the woman, I could see it all clearly. That combined with the ending actually made me consider that you had actually done that, even though its just a story. Amazing."
- xxxx writes: "I really liked it. I play that what if game all the time! Long live their dead rolling heads!"
- donhurtme writes: "it's disgusting, sickning, disturbing, and just plain horrible... but i loved it."
- ezwriter writes: "Woops, I apologize for carelsess typing. I considered the ending imaginative not unimaginative. Phil"